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PostSubject: Poetry   Thu 09 Jul 2009, 23:35
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bruised sky, a hint of leaves
prosaic abasement takes hold
malicious narcissism, only thyself seek
we used, discarded, left cold

the albatross 3 weep, lament
addled thought serrated
marred minds and ashen spirit
despair anticipated

truncated wings loam brief approach
spry impact await?
not these 3 burdensome shadows
desolation, torment, our fate

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri 10 Jul 2009, 05:54
CowboyFromHell wrote:


the albatross 3 weep, lament
addled thought serrated
marred minds and ashen spirit
despair anticipated


Arguably my favourite part for reasons I don't know. This all is seriously good. You have alot of talent, thanks for sharing
this. Who knows maybe these could be the words to some of your
instrumentals or should I say Instru-metals! Razz

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri 10 Jul 2009, 09:21
Ooo, very dark. Nice work. Smile

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PostSubject: Re: Poetry   Fri 10 Jul 2009, 11:05
many thanks

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